Soo… The first draft is here.
I chose to design the first infographic on the development of myopia as shown here
We have a higher chance of getting to people if they don’t have to read text but are shown an image.
I think it is important that people learn that myopia is not genetic but rather caused by our habits and lens use.
The images are only for demonstration purposes. I’m sure a designer could make some really cute cartoons.Also, I went for blue cause it is the color I associate with this site, and I love yellow but I guess that could change.
Now as for the design and text, I would love hearing your feedback on:
a) Do you think the text is sufficient and clear? I wanted to make it really simple but I realize the explanation may not be clear for someone outside of the EM community (everyone in my close circle has had me explain myopia in detail so they are not adequate guinea pigs either)
b) Would you add some more facts? Links to some more science?
c) Isn’t the cat the best?
d) the title.
d) Any general feedback and constructive criticism.
Thanks and have a great week!